A long-long time ago, when I was younger, I used to deliberately exit the Mako to kill that thing, because it meant more XP and a challenge! (and I was hunting a hardcore achievement or something, and was unemployed) Add to that early Russian version glitch with forever overheat weapons... So I can imagine, and I really don't envy your Shep. Though in my case Kaidan would die first.
This is great! I like the addition of dialogue, and it flows really smoothly. This should be quite the adventure! The backgrounds look great. I don't know what to say except that I appreciate your ability to draw very understandable rock formations!
That may not have been the best thing to say to Joker.
To the girl's credit since it's pre-ME1, she still have no idea of his condition (as he will tell her only later in the game !) but we agree it wouldn't been as much fun if she hadn't been so precisely untactful